Dickinson uses the metaphor of a funeral to describe her inner struggles. What metaphor would you use to describe your own mind?

 Prompt Response: I would compare my mind to a bouncy house, because my thoughts are bouncing around from one thing to another. It can be hard for me to focus on one thing unless I really care about it. My mind will start to wander if I get bored. I try not to lose focus during school, but sometimes I can't help it. I think this is a pretty accurate comparison. 


Summary: I drew my heart split between logic and emotion. 


Reflection: I think that having an active mind can be a good thing, but you have to be able to control it when you need to.



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